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I feel like an empty soulless beast.
I feel as though love has left me
and it is not pushing in my way.
Such is the nature of love.
Such is the balance of life.
We do love for a time
and in those moments its force is strong.
We feel alive.
When love seeps away,
to push another clot of hate,
we feel less alive.
Like part of us is missing.
Then we must find love elsewhere.
We must not depend so much on one person.
Love should also come
from the good persons surrounding us.
We do need a soul-mate.
A love to outlast all.
But we are young,
and out of love
destined to fall.
It does seem
too much hate is all around.
Yet when love pushes in our way,
we seem to realize
that it doesn't have to be all bad.
I feel as though love has left me
and it is not pushing in my way.
Such is the nature of love.
Such is the balance of life.
We do love for a time
and in those moments its force is strong.
We feel alive.
When love seeps away,
to push another clot of hate,
we feel less alive.
Like part of us is missing.
Then we must find love elsewhere.
We must not depend so much on one person.
Love should also come
from the good persons surrounding us.
We do need a soul-mate.
A love to outlast all.
But we are young,
and out of love
destined to fall.
It does seem
too much hate is all around.
Yet when love pushes in our way,
we seem to realize
that it doesn't have to be all bad.
the full name of this is;
"The Force to Control Our Beastliness"
i wrote this even before my ex and i broke up. i know it's weird, but i knew what was coming. this was sort of to prepare me for it. PrEMoNiTiONsSSs. lolz.
"The Force to Control Our Beastliness"
i wrote this even before my ex and i broke up. i know it's weird, but i knew what was coming. this was sort of to prepare me for it. PrEMoNiTiONsSSs. lolz.
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This is a very telling poem. It is a little wierd that you wrote it before it broke up, but it is very true, and everything is beautifully put.
This seems to be more in typical poem format than song format like some of your others. Is it, or am I just really not good at these things? XD Regardless, I really like it anyway!
This seems to be more in typical poem format than song format like some of your others. Is it, or am I just really not good at these things? XD Regardless, I really like it anyway!